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Writing Templates for the New TOEFL iBT® Test (2026): Email and Academic Discussion, with Sample Answers

Templates, time plans, and sample answers for Write an Email and Write for an Academic Discussion, plus Build a Sentence tips, based on ETS's 2026 practice test and scoring guides.

Updated October 27, 2026. Facts checked against ETS's official pages.

In short

  • The Writing section has three tasks in about 23 minutes: ten Build a Sentence items, one email in 7 minutes, and one academic discussion post in 10 minutes.
  • The email has to do three specific things the prompt lists. The discussion post should give and support your opinion; ETS says an effective one has at least 100 words.
  • Both are scored 0–5 against ETS's scoring guides, which reward clear elaboration, varied sentences, precise words, and few errors, and mark down language borrowed from the prompt.
  • A template is a skeleton for organizing your ideas fast, not filler to memorize. Below are one for each task, with a time plan and a sample answer.

Write an Email

What you get

A short situation, a recipient, and three bullet points that start "In your email, do the following": for example, say what you like about something, describe a problem, and ask a question. The To and Subject lines are filled in, and the directions say to write as much as you can, in complete sentences, in 7 minutes (from ETS's practice test).

What scores well

  • All three bullet points covered, each with a detail or reason, not just a sentence.
  • The right tone for the reader: polite and clear for a professor, an editor, or an office; relaxed for a friend. ETS's guide calls this using "appropriate social conventions".
  • Requests and questions phrased the way people really write them.

Email template

Dear [name],

I'm writing about [the situation, in one sentence].

[Bullet 1, with a reason or detail.]

[Bullet 2, with a specific detail: what happened, and when.]

[Bullet 3, usually a question or request: Could you let me know…? / Would it be possible to…?]

Thank you for [your help / your time].

Best regards,
[Your name]

Phrases worth having ready

ToTry
Say why you're writingI'm writing about… / I'm writing to let you know that…
Describe a problemWhen I tried to…, … / Unfortunately, … / The problem is that…
Ask or requestCould you let me know whether…? / Would it be possible to…? / I was wondering if…
SuggestOne option might be to… / If it helps, I could…
Thank and closeThank you for your help. / I look forward to hearing from you.

Time plan: 7 minutes

  • 1 minute: read the situation and the three bullets, and note one detail for each.
  • 5 minutes: write, one short paragraph per bullet.
  • 1 minute: check that every bullet is there, and fix typos.

A sample, with our own prompt

You signed up for a weekend photography workshop at the campus arts center. The center has moved it to Saturday morning, when you have a lab class. Write to the organizer, Ms. Rivera: explain why you signed up, describe the problem the new time causes, and ask about your options.

Sample answer (about 130 words)

Dear Ms. Rivera,

I'm writing about the weekend photography workshop I signed up for last month. I'm a second-year biology student, and I joined because I want to take better photos of plants for my field notes. Your session on natural light sounded like exactly what I need.

Unfortunately, the email I received this week says the workshop has moved to Saturday morning. I have a lab class from 9 to 12 on Saturdays, and attendance is required, so I can't be in both places.

Could you tell me whether there will be an afternoon session, or another date later this semester? If neither is possible, I'd be happy to receive a refund instead.

Thank you for your help.

Best regards,
Jordan Lee

Each bullet gets its own paragraph and a concrete detail (biology field notes, a required lab from 9 to 12), and the request offers two options and a fallback.

Write for an Academic Discussion

What you get

A professor's question for an online class discussion, and posts from two classmates with different views. You write your own post in 10 minutes, expressing and supporting your opinion in your own words. ETS's directions say an effective response contains at least 100 words.

What scores well

  • A clear position in the first sentence.
  • A reason the classmates didn't already give, explained with an example or detail. Repeating their points adds nothing to the discussion.
  • A sentence that engages with what a classmate said.
  • Your own words: the scoring guide marks down language mostly borrowed from the prompt.

Academic discussion template

Position: I agree with [name] that…, but… / In my view, …

Reason: My main reason is that… [a point nobody has made yet]

Example: For example, … / At my school, …

Engage: [Name] mentions…, and I'd add that… / Although [name] worries that…, …

Close: Overall, …

Time plan: 10 minutes

  • 1½ minutes: read the question and both posts; note what each classmate argued.
  • 1 minute: choose your side and a reason they didn't use, plus one example.
  • 6 minutes: write 110–140 words.
  • 1½ minutes: reread, vary repeated words, fix errors.

A sample, with our own prompt

Professor: Many universities are thinking about replacing printed textbooks with digital ones in every course. Should universities switch to digital textbooks only? Mina: Yes. Digital books cost less, and I can search them in seconds. Daniel: I'm not sure. I concentrate much better with a printed book.

Sample answer (about 140 words)

I see Daniel's point about concentration, but I think universities should move to digital textbooks, as long as students can still print the chapters they need. My main reason is fairness. At my school, some required books cost more than a hundred dollars, and students who can't afford them often study from old editions or skip the reading. A digital license that the university buys for everyone would close that gap on the first day of class. Mina mentions searching, and I'd add that digital books can be updated every year, which matters in fast-changing fields like computer science. As for concentration, the problem is the device, not the book: students can turn off notifications or print key chapters. Overall, the benefit for access is too important to ignore.

The post takes a side at once, adds a new reason (fairness) with a specific example, builds on one classmate, answers the other, and ends with a one-line conclusion.

Build a Sentence: what to know

  • Each item starts with a line of conversation, and you put words and phrases in order to answer it. You have about 6 minutes for all ten: the section is about 23 minutes, and the other two tasks take 17.
  • Many items in ETS's practice test are indirect questions, such as "Can you tell me when the library closes?" After the question word, use statement order (subject, then verb), not "when does the library close".
  • Some items give you one word more than you need, such as both "was" and "were". Pick the one that agrees with the subject.
  • The punctuation at the end tells you whether you're building a question or a statement.

Mistakes that cost points

  • Skipping one of the email's three bullet points.
  • Copying sentences from the prompt or the classmates' posts.
  • A memorized opening that doesn't fit the topic, which uses up time and adds nothing.
  • The wrong tone: texting style to a professor, or stiff formal language to a friend.
  • Running out of time before the last bullet or the conclusion. Practice with a clock.

Get your writing scored

Templates only help once you've practiced them under time pressure and seen how your answers score. On MockPrep, every email and discussion post is scored on the 1–6 scale against detailed rubrics, with feedback on what to fix, minutes after you finish, and your first full mock test is free. Use it with the one-month study plan.

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